Today I'm doing my literacy medals and it was about Matariki 9 stars we had do write another reason to get the two stars back and up in the dark black night. and I was pretty fun. By Quaid.
Great work Quaid I love the ending you rewrote and how the you made it so the patupaiarehe thought that the sky was too bright, do you think it is too bright at night with all the stars? To make it BTB you could explain what the original story is about in your caption so people that haven't read it can.
Hi Quaid, I like reading about your ending to the story, but I don't really know the beginning. How does it go? You painted a very good picture in my head with your words. Keep up the good work. Sharron
Great work Quaid I love the ending you rewrote and how the you made it so the patupaiarehe thought that the sky was too bright, do you think it is too bright at night with all the stars?
ReplyDeleteTo make it BTB you could explain what the original story is about in your caption so people that haven't read it can.
Hi Quaid, I like reading about your ending to the story, but I don't really know the beginning. How does it go? You painted a very good picture in my head with your words. Keep up the good work. Sharron
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