Wednesday 26 June 2019

Drop everything and write

My weekend.
On Monday 24th I Payton, Keton and Kolton went up to my Grandad’s farm we went over to the hut we put in the last row of carpet then we went into town we bort a lux a rubbish bin candy, chocolate, chips and all those nice sweets we got sugar, milo, and tea. Then we put in our camping bunks and fold out couches it is like a mini B&B all need to get the power done and put the lights in. Then it will be our nice hut. You could have breakfast because there is cereal there is a sink with a tap and all that stuff it is really cool!!!

By Quaid

2 comments:

  1. Wow Quaid, nice writing. It is so good to see you enjoying your writing. It sounds like you and your brothers and cousins are enjoying building your hut. Maybe you could add some pictures for us?

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  2. Shot Quaid The hut sounds goated Maybe next time explain what a b&b is.

    Thanks, Tristan

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