Welcome to my blog, I'm a student at Paroa School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
Great start Quaid! I like how you have made it really obvious about what happened at each step of the way. Maybe next time you can add more detail and really kick start that imagination of yours.
Ok next time I will really kick the detail's in to my storytellers thanks for the tip.
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Great start Quaid! I like how you have made it really obvious about what happened at each step of the way. Maybe next time you can add more detail and really kick start that imagination of yours.
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